Do you know who i am?
I am always silent,
always controlling
I am always suffocating
always there.
Who am i?
I am everything you've never wanted to be.
I am clawing at you like the sharp nails
on a dusty chalk board.
#i am surrounding you like the fog
on the coldest day of your life.
I am there whenever you
think
hesitate
wonder
query
question
mistrust
suspect
doubt yourself.
I am malevolence in anthropomorphic form
I am silent and shadowing all your thoughts
with my very existence
I am here to make you doubt
everything you hold dear within
your heart, Is breaking and your soul is stretched.
You know who i am.
I am always there
always controlling
I am always hiding,
always suffocating
I am you
I am doubt.














Comments
I really liked the structures you used.
One thing that I'd like to point out though:
"I am everything you've never wanted to be."
In this line, wouldn't it flow better if you just dropped the "'ve" after I ? Just a thought.
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Uncertainty is my one certainty. After all, one can only be certain he does /not/ know something. And Socrates agrees with me, so suck on that.
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