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Do you know who i am?
   I am always silent,
  always controlling
   I am always suffocating
           always there.
                    Who am i?

I am everything you've never wanted to be.
I am clawing at you like the sharp nails
              on a dusty chalk board.
#i am surrounding you like the fog
                        on the coldest day of your life.

I am there whenever you
         think
           hesitate
              wonder
                  query
                     question                   
                         mistrust
                            suspect
    doubt yourself.

I am malevolence in anthropomorphic form
I am silent and shadowing all your thoughts
                 with my very existence
I am here to make you doubt
                       everything you hold dear within
your heart, Is breaking and your soul is stretched.

You know who i am.
I am always there
   always controlling
  I am always hiding,
always suffocating
      I am you
           I am doubt.
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:iconarthurthebraveone:
Hmm.... nice :D
I really liked the structures you used.
One thing that I'd like to point out though:
"I am everything you've never wanted to be."
In this line, wouldn't it flow better if you just dropped the "'ve" after I ? Just a thought.

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Uncertainty is my one certainty. After all, one can only be certain he does /not/ know something. And Socrates agrees with me, so suck on that.

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